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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breathing

    To be truthful, I had no idea what you were talking about until I read your review. Actually, I would have to agree on what elephantwalrus said. It kind of ...

    Jun 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Smile, and the World Stops Breathing

    Nice! I like the enthusiasm of the end, where it turns out that it was just a boy smiling at you as you passed him in the hallways. It expresses ...

    May 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Kite tails

    Wow. Thats all I have to say. Well, almost. This is some pretty deep stuff. it makes a person wonder what it is like for someone like this to live. ...

    Apr 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Secret.

    I really liked the fact that you were trying to describe something through many others, it was neat. I would just like to point out though, that you left us ...

    Apr 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Be Free

    it was pretty good, but I'm confused. is it the wind, or a guy talking to you? And is it about love and death, or seeing something for the first ...

    Apr 15, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Daughter of the Sun and the Son of the Moon

    All I can say is...wow. I mean, it was a really good story. You brought a natural event, and made it something extraordinary. It was a fair amount of sadness, ...

    Mar 8, 2008


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